Comment on a “poet” “surprised spring flowers fall tree” the first paragraph

2022-05-22 0 By

The title is “Startled spring flowers fall trees”, meaning to express the feeling of falling flowers, let’s see what the author wrote.The first paragraph: a tree spring flowers make tsing yi was a cavity game-writing protocol dyed red breeze breeze disorderly, kiss rugged thin bone, why should meet had met the first sentence “a tree spring flowers make tsing yi rising” tsing yi, most propbably is refers to the leaves, the interpretation of the rising, rising is the appearance of soft prolapse, burning with spring and thriving, drooping branches how weak?Is that a bleak scene in late autumn or winter, moving to spring?Inconsistent with the reality, the expression of decadent mood, not desirable.As the saying goes, safflower still needs green leaves to help.What and what!Creating conflict?It’s disappointing at first.The second sentence: “a cavity of blood dyed breeze slowly” a cavity of blood, green, green.Blue blood refers to tree juice, dyed, checked dictionary explanation is: coloring, infection, infection, rendering, tree juice infected the cool breeze slowly blowing?What with what yo, Zhang Fei fight Yue Fei!I can’t imagine it, hahaha…Think and write.The third sentence: “Ruffled red, lightly kissed bony bones” ruffled red, ruffled red should refer to the wind blowing flowers messy appearance, after all, is the wind blowing flowers messy appearance, or flowers blowing wind?Ha ha ha, messy flowers can wind?And make waves?Alas, upside down black and white, can but shake his head sigh.There is nothing wrong with the six words “skinny bones”, anyway, all kinds of bones are the exclusive term of this “poet”, ha ha.The fourth sentence: “meet why ever met” there is no subject, the context should refer to the relationship between flowers and leaves, flowers and leaves is a part of a tree, talk about what meet why met?Are they strange?Please tell me, flowers and leaves do not know each other?They’re from different worlds, different dimensions?And meet in a tree?Unrecognized li, unrecognized li!Is there more to analyze?The author is drunk again, and then one thousand years, from the inexplicable wonder of flowers falling trees directly through the thousands of years ago Cui Hu, Chen Zi Ang and Li Bai.Excuse me, when you see ants climbing trees, will you think of the Yan-Huang Alliance fighting Chiyou?I think it must be possible.Because anything is possible!Hahaha …………